The hypotesis,which it is treated of said ship, gains momentum acording to recent studies and tests of arqueology, topography. In adition, travel books of Christopher Columbus have been analized too with interesting indications about the last trip of this ship.
The strangest thing about it is that I have found some pieces of news in American (all American countries) and British journals but nothing in Spanish journals. Will be the ship full of golden coins?(smile).
An American team OF EXPERTS haS found the probablE remains of THE "Santa Maria", THE ship THAT was used IN 1492* to REACH** [] the Indies, which Came to BE callED America later. According to THE British journal "The Independent", a team managed by Barry Clifford HAS found a ship [] off the NORTHERN coast of Haiti.
ReplyDeleteThe hypotHesis REGARDING THE ship gains momentum acCording to recent studies and tests of arCHAeology AND topography. In adDition, travel books of Christopher Columbus have been analYzed too with interesting indications about the last trip of this ship.
The most astonishing thing about it is that I have found the news ITEM in American (all American countries) and British journals but nothing in Spanish journals. Perhaps the ship is full of golden coins(smile).
Well done. Only a few grammatical errors. The rest are matters of style.
*I moved this here so that the "which came" clause comes right after "the Indies".
**"To arrive" refers only to the last act of a trip, not the entire trip.
Thanks. Finally, a group of news item has appeared today.
ReplyDeleteIt's good that we are not dependent on the news in a single language.
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