2014-06-05

I Am A Heart Lying In The Sun

Although I am a poor devil I almost always say the truth,
like hottest fire I always wanted to be who I am not.
The time doesn't spend near you, the clock doesn't exist,
it doesn't make sense between you and me.

Although I am a poor devil, the day wakes up and I start to walk,
with unbeatable morale, how hard it is to seek peace!
To co-exist beating to the others, our society is a good project for evil.

I leave blood on the paper, and all thing I write would break the next day,
If it were not for I believe in you, for above of all, you make me live,
you make me write leaving the trail of my soul,
and each verse is a little piece of fur, I am a heart lying in the sun.

Although I am a poor devil I know two or three things nothing more,
I know with who I must hanging out, I know how to keep faithfulness,
I know who are true friends, I know well where they are,
they never ask anything and always give.
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4 comments:

  1. Although I am a poor devil
    I almost always say the truth,
    like THE hottest fire
    I always wanted to be who I am not.
    The time doesn't PASS(1) near you,
    the clock doesn't exist,
    it doesn't make sense between you and me.

    Although I am a poor devil,
    the day wakes up and I start to walk,
    with unbeatable morale,
    how hard it is to seek peace!
    To co-exist WHILE(2) beating(3) [] the others,
    our society
    is a good project for evil.

    I leave blood on the paper,
    and EVERYthing I write would break the next day,
    If it were not THAT I believe in you,
    for above [] all, you make me live,
    you make me write leaving the trail of my soul,
    and each verse is a little piece of fur,
    I am a heart lying in the sun.

    Although I am a poor devil
    I know two or three things nothing more,
    I know with whoM(4) I must NOT hanG out,
    I know how to STAY faithfuL,
    I know who are true friends,
    I know well where they are,
    they never ask anything and always give.


    (1) We spend time, but time passes.
    (2) "To co-exist" implies living together in peace, so there's some contradiction between "co-exist" and "beating". The "while" is a way to acknowledge that contradiction.
    (3) "Defeating" would be better here so that there is no doubt about "golpeando"
    (4) "Whom" is a dying word, although I use it regularly. Those who do not use it would say "I know who I must not hang out with". "With who" sounds wrong to me and, I suspect, to almost everybody.

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  2. Is possible to say I know how to stay faithfulness?

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  3. I think "preserve faithfulness" would be the best way, but "stay faithful" is a lot better.

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  4. thanks a lot. I will stay faithful to your tips.

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