I thought, it was a good moment,
finally it became a reality
both hear of your silence
They say that it drags you as the sea.
I filled my luggage with books
I drew your smile beside the mine
I slept with your coat on the sofa
I want to be at your side
I want to look you and feel
I want to lose myself waiting for
I want to love you or die
And in the moment I saw your look looking for my face
the early morning of 20 th of January leaving the train
I asked myself what would it be without you the rest of my life
and since then I love you, I adore you and I keep love you.
I took a train that never slept
and I saw your face on a crystal
It was a reflection of midday' sun
It was a love poem to travel
I want to be at your side
I want to look you and feel
I want to lose myself waiting for
I want to love you or die
I lost you,
and I will not lose you
never more I will leave you
I looked for you, but very far of here
I found you thinking about me
In the moment I saw your look looking for my face
the early morning of 20 th of January leaving the train
I asked myself what would it be without you the rest of my life
and since then I love you, I adore you and I keep love you.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_AUgO4HF1I
I thought, it was a good moment,
ReplyDeletefinally it became a reality
SO MUCH TO hear of your silence
They say that it drags you as the sea.
I filled my luggage with books
AND ALSO WITH PHOTOS OF YOU FROM BEFORE
I drew your smile beside [] mine
I slept with your coat on the sofa
I want to be at your side
I want to look AT you and feel
I want to lose myself waiting []
I want to love you or die
And in the moment I saw your look SEEKing(1) [] my face
the early morning of THE 20th of January leaving the train
I asked myself what would THE REST OF MY LIFE be without you
and since then I love you, I adore you and I keep lovING you.
I took a train that never slept
and I saw your face IN a crystal
It was a reflection of THE midday sun
It was a love poem FOR travelING
I want to be at your side
I want to look at you and feel
I want to lose myself waiting
I want to love you or die
I lost you,
and I will not lose you
Never more will [I] leave you
I looked for you, but very far FROM here
I found you thinking about me
In the moment I saw your look seeking my face
the early morning of 20 th of January leaving the train
I asked myself what would the rest of my life be without you
and since then I love you, I adore you and I keep lovING you.
(1) I used "to seek" to avoid "look looking". Note that "to seek" does not require "for", so it is a direct equivalent of "buscar".
for traveling (US)
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Nunca más te dejaré: Never more will leave you. Why not: Never more I will leave you? You deleted I .
ReplyDeleteThx for your piece of advice because you're right, it's better to use: To Seek in stead of Look for. "look looking for " It sounds very strange. In my opinión after your correction.
I didn't mean to delete the "I"; the [] were to emphasize it. The correct form is: Never more will I leave you. The "never" at the beginning changed the order to verb-subject. I do not know why. Of course, the more normal, less poetic way of saying this is: I will never leave you.
DeleteIt's called an inversion, with the aim of emphasizing a sentence in English Matt.
DeleteI think it also has something to do with keeping the "never" next to the verb.
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