2.The four candles was consuming slowly.
3. The environment was so quiet that one can hear the conversation that they had.
4.The first said: "I am peace. However people don't achieve to maintain my light. I think that I will be turned off". And by decreasing its fire quickly, it turned off completely
5.The second said: "I am called faith. Unhappily I am very superfluous. People don't want to hear about me. By keeping myself turned on doesn't make sense."
When it finished of speaking, a breeze smoothly passed on it and was turned off.
6.The third candle expressed quick and sad: "I am love. I haven't the strength to keep me turned on. People ignore me and don't realize so hard this is. They even forget those who is very close and who love them."
And without waiting anymore, it was turned off.
7.Suddenly, A child stepped into there and saw the three candles turned off.
What is this? he said. You must be turned on until the end.
Said this, he started to cry.
8:Then, the forth candle spoke: "No fear, while I have fire, we can turn on the other candles. I am hope !
9.With shiny eyes, he grabed the lighted candle and lighted the rest.
10. I wish, the candle of hope never turn off on us!
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1.Four candles.
ReplyDelete2.The four candles wERE BEING consumED slowly.
3. The environment was so quiet that one cOULD hear the conversation that they had.
4.The first said: "I am peace. However people don't SUCCEED IN maintainING my light. I think that I will GO OUT". And by decreasing its fire quickly, it WENT OUT completely
5.The second said: "I am called faith. Unhappily I am very superfluous. People don't want to hear about me. By keeping myself ALIGHT doesn't make sense."
When it finished [] speaking, a breeze smoothly passed BY it and IT WENT OUT.
6.The third candle expressed quickLY and sadLY: "I am love. I haven't the strength to keep BURNING. People ignore me and don't realize HOW hard this is. They even forget those who ARE very close and who love them."
And without waiting anymore, it WENT OUT.
7.Suddenly, A child stepped into there and saw the three EXTINGUISHED candles.
What is this? he said. You must be ALIGHT/BURNING until the end.
HAVING said this, he started to cry.
8:Then, the foUrth candle spoke: "No fear, while I have fire, we can turn on the other candles. I am hope !
9.With shiny eyes, THE CHILD grabBed the liT candle and liT the rest.
10. I wish THAT the candle of hope never turnS off on us!
I hope that my memory keeps alight and doesn't go out while my life is burning.
ReplyDeleteWhy can I say "turns off" in nº 10?
Only because I missed it!
ReplyDeleteThat means that you are a human. Thanks a lot.
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