2014-09-13

If They Let us

If they let us we are going to love every life
If they let us we are going to live in a new world
I think we can be a new dawn of a new day
I think that you and I can still be happy.

If they let us we look for a corner close to heaven.
If they let us we became the clouds in velvet.

And there,  together both, very close to God,
it will happen what we dream.

If they let us I take you your hand, honey
and we go away

If they let us we forget the all rest.
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4 comments:

  1. If they let us we are going to love EACH OTHER OUR WHOLE liVES
    If they let us we are going to live in a new world
    I think we can be a new dawn of a new day
    I think that you and I can still be happy.

    If they let us we WILL(2) look for a corner close to heaven.
    If they let us we WILL becOme the clouds in velvet.

    And there, together [], very close to God,
    it will happen what we dream(1).

    If they let us I WILL take you your hand, honey
    and we WILL go away

    If they let us we WILL forget ALL the rest.


    (1) better: our dream will come true
    (2) The "will" is necessary in this "If" statement.

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  2. You are right. I have been revising my grammar notes. A type of conditional stantandard needs to use "will"(type I). I was using the "type 0" when the situation is completly sure, for instance:"If you freeze water, it turns into ice". So my sentences're wrong.
    But what about (line 2) "If they let us we are going to live in a new world" ? it it right?

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  3. Yes, it's right. In this case "are going to" is equivalent to "will", expressing the future tense.

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  4. very interesting, it does the trick, thanks

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