2014-07-02

The Gunman

The gunman has already arrived to the city,
he is called "the one eyed man", his job is killing.
the whole village have fled, no one wants to go out,
in the saloon, the waiter stopped to serve.

And I know that in this occasion he is coming for me,
I have to do something, yes, I'll get rid of him.

His laugh is so false like that of Judas,
his look is the coldest than you can know,
In his waist there are more bullets than in all an arsenal,
in his revolver there are more notches than on the bar counter,
he is the dirtiest and fastest in shooting.
And I know...

He just comes into by saloon door,
by a signal, he indicates me how unhappy I am.
I know that you can't count on the sheriff,
his motto is always the law and it is no legal for him.
Lyrics

5 comments:

  1. The gunman(2) has already arrived AT the city,
    he is called "the one eyed man", his job is killing.
    the whole village haS fled, no one wants to go out,
    in the saloon, the waiter stopped [] servING.

    And I know that ON this occasion he is coming for me,
    I have to do something, yes, I'll get rid of(1) him.

    His laugh is AS false AS that of Judas,
    his look is the coldest than you can know,
    In his BELT there are more bullets than in A WHOLE arsenal,
    in his revolver there are more notches than on the bar counter,
    he is the dirtiest and fastest in shooting.
    And I know...

    He just cAmE iN by THE saloon door,
    by a signal, he indicates TO me how unhappy I am.
    I know that you can't count on the sheriff,
    his motto is always the law and it is noT legal for him.


    (1) good phrase
    (2) option: gunfighter, as commonly used in Western movies

    ReplyDelete
  2. it's a nightmare the using "me" ot "to me" after the verb. Probably there is not rules about this. Thanks anyway Matt.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I think you're right. "He shows me how unhappy I am" would have been fine.

      Delete
    2. There are a couple lists here that might help:
      https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/en/english-grammar/verbs/double-object-verbs
      I noted that "show" is there but "indicate" is not.

      Delete
  3. I appreciate your attention, I have found something here:
    http://forum.wordreference.com/showthread.php?t=1858342&p=9282465#post9282465
    It has to do with verbs which uses "to" as preposition. I think the page of British Council speak of different topic.

    ReplyDelete

Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.