The
ophthalmologist removed the eye patch from my grandmother’s left eye. First,
the doctor cleaned the area and observed the eye. Second, he examined the eye
through a complex machine. Everything looked right, he said. Then, the doctor
asked us to move to the eye exam room.
The
doctor’s assistant sat my grandmother down on a comfortable chair. The moment
of truth finally came. The assistant projected some big letters on the wall.
Right away, my grandmother said, “D and E.” The assistant projected smaller
letters little by little. Surprisingly, my grandmother nailed almost all the
letters even though her right eye needs surgery too. Her new eyesight in the
left eye is 20/40, not bad for an 87-year-old lady.
Laughing
and excited, my grandmother left the doctor’s office. She could distinguish the
faces of the other patients. When we arrived at our house, she started to look
around. Everything seemed new for her: the color of the house, the neighbor’s
house, the landscape, the cars, and so on. Three days after the surgery, she
asked me to buy a newspaper. She hadn’t read a newspaper in a long time.
In
August, my grandmother has a follow-up appointment. The doctor will decide the
date of the right eye surgery. Right now, we have reached the halfway mark of
this interminable odyssey.
To
be continued.
Perfect. Absolutely perfect. Read it over carefully and notice all the things that you got right.
ReplyDeleteI am happy for your grandmother.
Thanks Matt. I spent about an hour checking each preposition.
ReplyDeleteIt paid off! Sometimes I do that too. Sometimes I think it's better to just "wing it".
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