2014-10-10

Who Will Be

Someone will delete the taste and the memory
of the love that I keep due to your love,
someone will win your place in my body and my heart.

Someone who is faithful,
someone who is not so cruel as you,
someone who loves me but truly.
eternally.

Who will be
who will breathe life into my life
unreservedly and beyond measure
...
who will be
who will dye of tenderness
my silences and bitterness
...
Someone will stop the time's clock
and everything will change from this moment,
the river will meet its track again
...
Someone but who? Lyrics

2 comments:

  1. Someone will ERASE(1) the taste and the memory
    of the love that I keep due to your love,
    someone will win your place in my body and my heart.

    Someone who is faithful,
    someone who is not so cruel as you,
    someone who loves me [] truly.
    eternally.

    Who will be
    who will breathe(2) life into my life
    unreservedly and beyond measure
    ...
    who will be
    who will COLOR(3) WITH tenderness
    my silences and bitterness
    ...
    Someone will stop the CLOCK/PASSAGE/TICKING OF time
    and everything will change from this moment,
    the river will RETURN TO its COURSE/BANKS again
    ...
    Someone but who?


    (1) "Delete" is too technical for this context.
    (2) Great choice to translate "dará".
    (3) For figurative senses like this, "to color" is better.

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  2. It is impresive, every text are useful to learning

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