2014-10-02

A Sailboat called Freedom

He was leaving yesterday, he took his stuff
and started to sail,
A shirt, some jeans and a song
Where will he go? where will he go?
He said goodbye and decided to fight the duel against the sea
and travel around the world on his sailboat
and sail,....

And he left and his sailboat was called freedom
and in the sky he discovered gulls and painted trails over the sea.
....
His heart looked for a different way to live
but the waves shouted him,  go with the others,...

And he felt slept and the night shouted him
Where do you go?
And through his dreams he drew gulls
and thought: I must return today.

And he returned and/while a voice asked him
How are you?
And upon looking it, he discovered some eyes,
blue ones like the sea
...Video Lyrics

2 comments:

  1. He was leaving yesterday, he took his stuff
    and started to sail,
    A shirt, some jeans and a song
    Where will he go? where will he go?
    He said goodbye and decided to fight the duel against the sea
    and travel around the world on his sailboat
    and sail,....(0)

    And he left and his sailboat was called freedom(1)
    and in the sky he discovered gulls(2) and painted trails over the sea.
    ....
    His heart looked for a different way to live
    but the waves shouted TO/AT him, go with the others,...

    And he [] slept and the night shouted TO him
    Where do you go?
    And IN his dreams he drew gulls
    and thought: I must return today.

    And he returned and/while a voice asked him
    How are you?
    And upon looking AT it, he discovered some eyes,
    blue ones like the sea


    Great job!

    (0) This whole section sounds very natural.
    (1) We also have the synonymous "liberty".
    (2) It's more usual to say "seagulls".

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