Apart from all these things, I would like to write about a Natural Park, which I had the chance to visit: The Arches Natural Park in UTAH. When my friends told me that we were going to visit, It was a surprise for me. I was searching on the net and I saw a desert landscape , sometimes it looked like a place near from the place where I live.
But at the end, nothing to compare with my surrounding. The reddish colour of the land, stones sculpted or erosioned by the air were a real surprise for me. Sometimes I wonder, where are the horses, the indians ... like in the movies.
The art has been made by the nature for ages. Amazing place. One more, The nature surpise us again. After 9 hours, walking, taking pictures I wanted to be there more time because I needed to visit two arches more.
Interesting place to visit.
Utah, a very unknown state, a place where we should go to visit.
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ReplyDeleteI've just arrived from [t]he USA, [] having enjoyed [] 10 days there. I can say that all in the USA is Big. Amazing. People are friendly and [] very, very polite. Their upbringing is easy to notice.
Apart from all these things, I would like to write about a [n]atural [p]ark, which I had the chance to visit: The Arches Natural Park in Utah. When my friends told me that we were going to visit IT, it was a surprise for me. I was searching on the net and I saw a desert landscape, sometimes it looked like a place near TO the place where I live.
But at the end, THERE WAS nothing to compare with my surroundingS. The reddish colour of the land, stones sculpted or eroDed by the air were a real surprise for me. Sometimes I wonderED where [] the horses AND the Indians WERE ... like in the movies.
The art has been made by [] nature for ages. AN amazing place. One more THING: The nature surpRiseD us again. After 9 hours OF walking AND taking pictures I wanted to be there EVEN more time because I needed to visit two arches more.
AN interesting place to visit.
Utah, a very unknown state, a place where we should go to visit.
[] Nature is spectacULAR.
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I've just RETURNed from the USA, having enjoyed 10 days there. I can say that EVERYTHING in the USA is Big. Amazing. People are friendly and very, very polite. Their GOOD upbringing is easy to notice.
Apart from all these things, I would like to write about a natural park, which I had the chance to visit: The Arches Natural Park in Utah. When my friends told me that we were going to visit it, I WAS SURPRISED. I was searching on the net and I saw a desert landscape, sometimes it looked like a place near MY HOME.
But at the end, there was nothing to compare with my surroundings. The reddish colour of the land, stones sculpted or eroded by the air were a real surprise for me. Sometimes I wondered where the horses and the Indians were ... like in the movies.
The art has been made by nature for ages. An amazing place. One more thing: The nature surprised us again. After 9 hours of walking and taking pictures I wanted to STAY even LONGER because I WANTed to visit two MORE arches.
An interesting place to visit.
Utah, a very unknown state, a place where we should go to visit.
Nature is spectacular.
Well done. You have visited a part of the country that I haven't seen, except from an airplane at 30,000 feet. How did your English go? Did you get a lot of practice?
Matt, At the beginning, it was awful, because i couldn't understand pretty well. When I have to go back to Spain I began to understand something better and to speak better. I wanted to speak well and I looked like if I didn't know how to speak. Nerves Matt. I can't do anything against them!
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