2014-11-17

It's Over

Everything what I do you,
before, you already did it me.
And now, what do you want from me
if you don't exist for me?
I am even better person
because I don't want to hurt you.
I just know that I don't love you,
my love went away over the years.

It's over
because I proposed to me and suffered
like no one had before suffered and my skin
remained empty and alone, hopeless
in oblivion and after fighting against death I started
to recover me a little and forgot
all what I loved you but now,
but now my world is another.

Don't come to me with that soft soap
nor do ask me for help,
when I needed you, I couldn't count on with you.
Neither do I want, nor do I hate you,
I want you to understand me well,
so you are one of many whom I never met.

6 comments:

  1. Everything THAT I WOULD do TO you,
    before, you already did it me.
    And now, what do you want from me
    if you don't exist for me?
    I am even A better person
    because I don't want to hurt you.
    I just know that I don't love you,
    my love went away over the years.

    It's over
    because I proposed [] and suffered
    like no one had before suffered and my skin
    remained empty and alone, hopeless
    in oblivion and after fighting against death I started
    to recover [] a little and forgot
    all That I loved ABOUT you but now,
    but now my world is another.

    Don't come to me with that soft soap
    nor [1] ask me for help,
    when I needed you, I couldn't count on [] you.
    Neither do I LOVE YOU, nor do I hate you,
    I want you to understand me well,
    THAT you are one of many whom I never met.


    (1) "nor" is not used here because the subject "you" is not stated

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  2. (1) what do you mean? could you put any examples?

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  3. I do not love you. + I do not hate you. => Neither DO I love you nor DO I hate you.

    He didn't mean it. + He didn't say it. => Neither DID he mean it nor DID he say it.

    However, when you are combining negative commands, that lack an explicit subject, there's no need to insert DO:

    Don't eat the cookies. + Don't spill your milk: Neither eat the cookies nor spill the milk.

    By the way, if the two independent sentences have common parts, the combined sentence is usually shortened. The sentences above could be shortened to:

    I neither love you nor hate you.
    He neither meant it nor said it.

    or even:

    I neither love nor hate you.
    He neither meant nor said it.

    So the form is: neither A nor B. A and B can be single words, phrases, or complete sentences. It they are complete sentences with explicit subjects, we put a form of "do" ahead of the subjects:

    Neither do I want to say more on this topic nor do you want to hear it!

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  4. You have a knack for teaching. God bless you. Que Dios te lo pague(typical Spanish expresion)
    Practising:
    Neither do you study nor do you work.
    You neither live nor you let living
    Neither enjoy nor let enjoy us
    You neither eat nor shut up when sitting around the table

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  5. "knack" -- good word!

    A couple corrections:
    You neither live nor let live.
    Neither enjoy nor let us enjoy.

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