Yesterday, before going to work, I was watching the news whe suddenly a news impacted to me. In USA, there is girl, who is suffering from a serious illness. I think she knows that this Christmas will be her last Christmas. She wanted people were to her house to sing her Christmas carols. People went to sing her. She lives in Pensilvania. 10.000 people were to make happier her last days. It's a pity but in these cases everybody forget their stuff only to make easier her pain in her last days. Solidarity is the name of this act. In my opinion, this kind of acts, make that Christmas have more sense. 10.000 people singing at the same time, is the best thing to help her in her farewell.
Live is unfair, because a little girl with a long life has to suffer to die. I wish nobody has to suffer.
Merry Xmas.
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ReplyDeleteYesterday, before going to work, I was watching the news when suddenly a news ITEM impacted [] me. In THE USA, there is girL who is suffering from a serious illness. I think she knows that this Christmas will be her last Christmas. She wanted people TO BE AT her house to sing her Christmas carols. People went to sing TO her. She lives in PenNsYlvania. 10.000 people were THERE to make her last days HAPPIER. It's ADMIRABLE THAT* in these cases everybody forgetS their stuff only to make her pain EASIER in her last days. Solidarity is the name of this act. In my opinion, this kind of acT makeS [] Christmas have more sense. 10.000 people singing at the same time is the best thing to help her in her farewell.
LiFe is unfair, because a little girl with a long life AHEAD OF HER has to suffer AND die. I wish THAT nobody haD to suffer.
*"It's a pity" has the sense of "Qué lástima".
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Yesterday, before going to work, I was watching the news when suddenly a news item AFFECTED me. In the USA, there is girl who is suffering from a serious illness. I think she knows that this Christmas will be her lasT. HER CHRISTMAS WISH WAS THAT people COME TO her house to sing her Christmas carols. SO people went to sing to her AT HER HOME in Pennsylvania. 10.000 people were there to make her last days happier. HOW WONDERFUL that in cases LIKE THIS everybody forgets their OWN PROBLEMS only to make THIS GIRL'S pain easier in her last days. I CALL THIS AN ACT OF solidarity. In my opinion, this kind of DEED GIVES Christmas more sense. 10.000 people singing at the same time is the best thing to help THIS GIRL in her farewell.
Life is unfair WHEN a little girl WHO SHOULD HAVE a long life ahead of her has to suffer and die INSTEAD. I wish nobody had to suffer.
Thanks for the positive story of compassion. Merry Christmas to you and yours.