Greece is living a dramatic situation. Everybody knows the problem that they are enduring.
The big economic crisis is triggering the current situation.
Greece is part of the European Community. European Community is trying to solve this situation.
Everybody knows, that when a country has a serious economic problem, everybody is involved in solving it. The problem is that the population, is the main sufferer.
Everybody has to be involved to solve this situation. Let me explain, my point of view of this situation:
1.- Europe is living a new period with the birth of a new political movement. This one is against the current system. They think that population must be who must be decide their future. Not politicians. But they have to choose their own politicians to manage their country. It is true that corruption, abuses.... are damaging our current democratic system. But our politicians must be sensitive with the real situation of their citizens. Being against with the rules and system is not the solution.
2.- When somebody needs money, a loan is the solution. But if a country aplies for a loan, it must pay back the loan in the terms that both parts agreeded. If there is some problem to pay back it, both parts must negociate the best solution.
Cancel the debt is not the solution.
3.- European Community, is giving them a lot of opportunities to solve the situation, but Greek Government is refusing the help. It is true, that population is going to suffer, but with the help of the UE and another countries, they are going to suffer too.
UE must be stronger and all countries members must feel the European Instititution like their own country. UE is the best solution to develop Europe, and obviously their countries. We should imitate United States of America. Every state feels the USA like their own state. All together.
Greece is living a dramatic situation. Everybody knows the problem that they are enduring*.
ReplyDeleteThe big economic crisis is triggering* the current situation.
Greece is part of the European Community. THE European Community is trying to solve this situation.
Everybody knowS thaT, when a country has a serious economic problem, everybody is involved in solving it. The problem is that the populatioN is the main sufferer*.
Everybody has to be involved to solve this situation. Let me explaiN my point of view of this situation:
1.- Europe is living a new period with the birth of a new political movement. This one is against the current system. They think that THE population must be who must [] decide their future. Not politicians. But they have to choose their own politicians to manage their country. It is true that corruption, abuses.... are damaging our current democratic system. But our politicians must be sensitive* TO the real situation of their citizens. OPPOSING ALL CHANGES with the rules and system is not the solution.
2.- When somebody needs money, a loan is the solution. But if a country apPlies for a loan, it must pay back the loan in the terms that both partIEs agreeD TO. If there is some problem to pay IT back, both partIEs must negoTiate the best solution.
CancelLING* the debt is not the solution.
3.- THE European CommunitY is giving them a lot of opportunities to solve the situation, but THE Greek government is refusing the help. It is truE that THE population is going to suffer, but with the help of the UE and Other countries, they are going to suffer too.
THE UE must be stronger and all MEMBER countries must feel ABOUT the European Instititution like THEY FEEL ABOUT their own country. THE UE is the best solution to develop Europe, and obviously their countries. We should imitate THE United States of America. Every state feels THAT the USA IS their own COUNTRY. All together.
Excellent! You know you're doing well when the majority of corrections are about commas.
*good vocabulary
Interesting tidbit: It was the American civil war (1861-65) that really crystallized the national identity. Prior to the war, "The United States" was used as a plural noun. For example: The United States are opposed to the resolution. After the war, it became singular: The United States is opposed to the resolution.