I saw that sparkling star
It was shining so bright!
All seemed so quiet, so right
that my heart was full of delight.
Now nothing is dark
because of that silent, gleaming star
that brought me peace and new light
and with joy my spirit ignites.
There it is...my star!
dreaming and radiant, and even so far
like in heaven, so high!
flaming and cheering my heart.
You are filling my soul from that night
I want to live enjoying your sight
hearing your invitation so loud
giving to you my just rekindled life.
Fanny,
ReplyDeleteIt is quite good. You used all the words well and there are no grammatical issues.
Matt
Thanks Matt! Someone told me that writing a poem was a good exercise to learn the language. I think that it was a good advice!
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