It's very sad to talk about what it's happening in Europe and mainly, about syrian refugees.
The problem is that they want to achieve Europe, as a the door of freedom. In my opinion, I think that all countries member of the Eurpean Community want to help to all the syrian refugees. But, they are too much people, and the situation is getting overdramatic ( I don't know if "is getting overdramatic is used well.).
Every country has its own infrastucture and now with the massive entrace of syrian people, the situation is getting dramatic, not only for the european countries but also for the main victims, syrian refugees.
Everybody must have the best conditions to live, but this is an unexpecting situation. They mustn't suffer discrimination and the have to live in the best conditions.
Time runs quickly, at the same time that the situation. I wish we could listen news with the aim of supporting and helping them.
It's a sad situation. But we mustn't forget that it is part of ouw history.
It's very sad to talk about what IS happening in Europe and mainly, about Syrian refugees.
ReplyDeleteThe problem is that they want to REACH Europe, as the door of freedom. In my opinion, [] all MEMBER countries of the European Community want to help [] all the Syrian refugees. But, they are too MANY people, and the situation is getting overdramatic(1).
Every country has its own infrastucture and now with the massive entrance of Syrian people, the situation is getting DRASTIC, not only for the European countries but also for the main victims, THE Syrian refugees.
Everybody must have the best conditions to live, but this is an unexpectED situation. They mustn't(2) suffer discrimination and they have to live in the best conditions.
Time runs quickly, at the same time AS the situation. I wish we could listen TO news with the aim of supporting and helping them.
It's a sad situation. But we mustn't forget that it is part of our history.(3)
(1) "Overdramatic" is a word, but it might not convey what you mean here. We use it when someone is adding more drama to a situation than it deserves. "Drastic" might be a better word for your purpose.
(2) Good use of "mustn't".
(3) I wonder what you mean by it being "part of your history". Do you mean that is the result of historical actions by Europe? Or do you mean that it is so significant that it is historic? ("historical" = related to the past, "historic" = related to the past and IMPORTANT).
The events certainly raise fundamental questions about people's rights to move to safety (and opportunity), along with countries' rights to control their borders. It is further evidence of how interconnected is the world that we live in. We cannot expect to remain immune to calamities occurring in other parts of the world.
When I referred to ... It's parto of our history, it's because, we are living a sad historic moment. All these movements, are building our current history ( mundial history)
DeleteThen "historic" is the right word. These are historic events.
ReplyDeleteThanks Matt. Sadly we are living these historic events, without anything to do to stop them.
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