it is like being dancing alone,
you are dancing on your volcano
and I am two meters from you
dancing at the pole.
Let's just try once, dancing like in fire.
by embraced to the beat, without ever separating
Dancing close together is to dance
the same that the sea dances with the dolphins,
heart by heart, two dancers in a only hall,
heart by heart, and just in a hall,
very embraced each other, caressing each other,
feeling each other our skin,
our ballad is going to sound, we are going to try,
to try the art to fly.
Dancing...
You will hear the music after
it is asking for a kiss by shouting,
and goes up through your feet,
something that you don't see
what has never been written.Lyrics
Dancing separate isn't [] dancING,
ReplyDeleteit is like [] dancing alone,
you are dancing on your volcano
and I am two meters from you
dancing at the pole.
Let's just try once, dancing like in fire.
[] embraced to the beat, without ever separating
your body from my body.
TO dancE close together is to dance
the same AS the sea dances with the dolphins,
heart TO heart, two dancers in a SINGLE hall,
heart by heart, and just in a hall,
DEEPLY embracING each other, caressing each other,
feeling each other'S [] skin,
our ballad is going to sound, we are going to try,
to try the art OF flyING.
Dancing...
You will hear the music afterWARDS
it is asking for a kiss by shouting,
and goes up through your feet,
something that you don't see
what has never been written.
I am trying to understand why line 1 and 9 have a different structure. Dancing/to dance
ReplyDeleteI gave you two options. They are both acceptable, but it is important that the structure is parallel, that is: [A] close together is [A].
ReplyDeleteOK, I got it. thanks
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